![]() ![]() ![]() (EE ottoman, I volunteer to be a beta reader any time you need one!) P41 ".as if for conformation." should be ".as if for confirmation." Maybe, "The house they finally pulled up to was huge, white, and new-looking, surrounded by a gate and a fence." or ".a gated fence"? P40 "The house they finally pulled up to was huge, white, and new-looking, surrounded by a gate." doesn't sound right. P23 "While some geeks wear sweater vest." should be "While some geeks wear sweater vests." P23 "I think you're logic is faulty." should be "I think your logic is faulty." I'd have written it: ".t-shirt with a button-up shirt open over it, a much-worn leather jacket over that, and her black cowboy hat firmly on her head." P16 ".t-shirt with a button-up shirt open over it a much-worn leather jacket over that and her black cowboy hat firmly on her head." was really hard to read on first pass. The chance to read a new novel is reward aplenty! I'm not receiving (nor will I expect to receive or accept) remuneration for this review. This is a "galley" copy ebook, supplied by Net Galley. DISCLOSURE: Unlike the majority of reviews in this blog, I've neither bought this book nor borrowed it from the library. ![]()
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